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Re: project 1 rough #2

Posted: Sun Sep 16, 2018 5:44 pm
by hiitsyuri24
Hi!
I like your colors in first set, but the paragraph is little bit hard to read. I would suggest make it little bigger. Great job!

Re: project 1 rough #2

Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2018 5:12 pm
by Zera-Chann
Love the style and layout for the computer one!

The phone one layout seems a little too much

Good luck!!

Re: project 1 rough #2

Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2018 5:15 pm
by giusti56
Hello, I like the color and use of images. I think some spacing with the images and rearranging would help the overall design though.

Re: project 1 rough #2

Posted: Tue Sep 18, 2018 12:03 am
by clawson
I like the layered background and think it is a strong design that could even to stand on it's own without the photos

Re: project 1 rough #2

Posted: Tue Sep 18, 2018 11:14 am
by themeg98
I love the colors on this one! The only thing I would change is try to dull your background a little bit. The imagery kinda gets lost with all thats going on back there. Nice use of the flares but I wouldn't use too many on the desktop design.

Re: project 1 rough #2

Posted: Tue Sep 18, 2018 2:43 pm
by raton de biblioteca
Hi Ronnie,

I agree with the others on this one! The color contrast especially the purple yellow makes this layout pop on my screen. The tiling looks well balanced and keeps my interest. If there was something that I would improve upon, I would make it so that the purple of the image and the purple of the background had more contrast, but this is really minor for me. Overall refreshing design.

Best,

Rachel

Re: project 1 rough #2

Posted: Wed Sep 19, 2018 1:17 pm
by anayaestevan
Hey Veronica,

I like these designs. It reminds me of a Scientology website. I would just be careful about the background interfering with the foreground. It's a little distracting for me. You have nice font choices here too!

Re: project 1 rough #2

Posted: Wed Sep 19, 2018 6:18 pm
by Zera-Chann
I would say i like this more than the purple and yellow

Best of luck!

Re: project 1 rough #2

Posted: Wed Sep 19, 2018 7:52 pm
by Tickosity
I like the colors on these ones. However I'm finding the bright white starbursts distracting for me.