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Re: Project 1 Final
Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2018 5:18 pm
by anayaestevan
Stacy,
These are amazing! Really great design here.
Your fonts and the lower case lend well to your layout. Everything is easy to read and easy to follow. Navigation is clear and concise. Great work!
Re: Project 1 Final
Posted: Thu Oct 11, 2018 8:19 pm
by Jackal
Hey Staci!!
I love your designs and how well they represent you, also your logo is so clean, luv it!!
Re: Project 1 Final
Posted: Thu Oct 11, 2018 8:42 pm
by agostina_renau
giiirl this looks awesome!!! there is so much going on but it is fun.
my favorite part is definitely the rounded shape against the background.
Re: Project 1 Final
Posted: Thu Oct 11, 2018 10:38 pm
by kj923
Staci! Love the contrast and color pallet! I think the changes you made made a big difference in your overall design flow! Great job!
Re: Project 1 Final
Posted: Fri Oct 12, 2018 2:13 pm
by Instructor
Yeah! Let your geometry flag fly. Don't hide those shapes behind bars.
Ordinarily, I wouldn't be a fan of all these colors, but they work really well here. It has a strong Justin Maller vibe. I'm glad you didn't take any of it's depth out when you touched it up after preliminary work. Heck it looks like the touchups were minor ones just here and there. Good. It was a good layout/design/colorscheme already. Your fonts remain excellent and your logo "target" does a good job of grabbing the eye. You use the absence of color and pattern to attract the eye. Nice! Pretty good use of margin throughout, too. I like the way you use your contrast to establish visual hierarchy and really show what should be prioritized.
The top and bottom margins of the content area on your computer design are a little tight. Otherwise you've fixed everything else.
Great work, Staci!
Re: Project 1 Final
Posted: Fri Oct 12, 2018 7:40 pm
by raton de biblioteca
I frickin love the background overflow into the navigation area!!! What a novel idea! The colors with black and white overlay are super eye catching and easy on the eyes it nicely balanced.
Re: Project 1 Final
Posted: Fri Oct 12, 2018 8:22 pm
by Big_DaDdy
Staci, Staci, Staci.
Haha. Love it. Only thing is that maybe your media logos are too big, the same for your home, proect1, project2, project3 tabs. Less is more in this case I think. Think about it.
Re: Project 1 Final
Posted: Fri Oct 12, 2018 8:28 pm
by veronica chapman
Like I said the first time, I love your colorful geometric design. My only suggestion is on your web version you might try a different alignment on your body copy.
Re: Project 1 Final
Posted: Fri Oct 12, 2018 8:32 pm
by Jaime Ramey
Hi Staci,
I really think your layouts are amazing and fun. I love the colors and geometric design.
Really, Really nice job!
Jaime