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Re: project 2 roughs
Posted: Wed Oct 31, 2018 6:56 pm
by Stasiavous
I'm a fan of your rough 1! I love the soft, ethereal quality of the photo. Love it!
Re: project 2 roughs
Posted: Wed Oct 31, 2018 9:33 pm
by Tickosity
I prefer your roughs #2. They feel more modern and cleaner to me. I like the use of the photo as the background on the first page of the first design however I still like the overall feel of the second designs more.
Re: project 2 roughs
Posted: Wed Oct 31, 2018 9:35 pm
by agostina_renau
How cute, maybe one day I will dress in white and have a ceremony for my marriage.
I like the light blue, I wish you could combine it with one or two more colors
Re: project 2 roughs
Posted: Thu Nov 01, 2018 4:57 pm
by Jackal
I'm a huge fan of your second set of desktop designs! I feel like I would like to see that same concept incorporated into a mobile design as well, the photo is so striking! I'd also recommend playing with colors more so it doesn't look so similar to the original site. Nice job though!
Re: project 2 roughs
Posted: Fri Nov 02, 2018 7:33 pm
by Big_DaDdy
Hi Dana, I think your layouts are headed in a good direction but I think you should push a more modern look for your site. That background pattern looks like wallpaper, ugh
I like the typeface that you're using for the company name, good selection. Your imagery is good but maybe giving them borders might help them be more uniform and modern? Think about it
Good work
Re: project 2 roughs
Posted: Sat Nov 03, 2018 6:07 pm
by Jaime Ramey
Hi there, I really like the full picture website. Its really stunning and eye catching.
Jaime
Re: project 2 roughs
Posted: Sun Nov 04, 2018 5:30 pm
by clawson
I like the rough one best, great picture and I like how you treated the title. On the mobile design the button text is a little hard to read.
Re: project 2 roughs
Posted: Sun Nov 04, 2018 10:08 pm
by veronica chapman
I prefer the last two designs. I think the font on the last one gets a little lost. Maybe white would work better.
Re: project 2 roughs
Posted: Mon Nov 05, 2018 1:40 am
by matt
I agree,
the second layout looks really clean and I like it much better than your first layout. I would think about your headline "title" a little more tho, looks a like you might be able to do more with it.