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Re: Prelim. #2

Posted: Wed Oct 31, 2018 11:43 am
by themeg98
I like how clean and how soft the colors are. its definitely an improvement.

Re: Prelim. #2

Posted: Wed Oct 31, 2018 4:03 pm
by hiitsyuri24
The first design is really clean, and that one is my favorite. Sentences are little hard to read I think. I would make them little bigger.

Re: Prelim. #2

Posted: Wed Oct 31, 2018 4:27 pm
by raton de biblioteca
Kind of ironic that the images on the original site are blurry? Your designs are WAY better than this website! I like the first design over the second one because of the navigation bar and information tiles. I always like a website that is easy to follow when my eyes are bothering me.

Re: Prelim. #2

Posted: Wed Oct 31, 2018 4:58 pm
by agostina_renau
Hi April!
your choice of color is great, I think you should stick to it!
And by far the second design is great.

Re: Prelim. #2

Posted: Wed Oct 31, 2018 9:36 pm
by Tickosity
I like the more modern feel of the second design, it does feel like it's for a younger audience to me.

Re: Prelim. #2

Posted: Thu Nov 01, 2018 4:59 pm
by Jackal
Hey April!

I really like the second desktop version, I would maybe try incorporating the structure you've set in the first one with the bar across the top though! Nice job!!

Re: Prelim. #2

Posted: Thu Nov 01, 2018 5:12 pm
by tandyg
Hi I like the layout of the design. The eye in the background is appealing. Looking t=for the text and navigation. It seems faded out a bit.

Re: Prelim. #2

Posted: Fri Nov 02, 2018 7:37 pm
by Big_DaDdy
Hi April, layout is headed in a good direction. The homepage is to blue, I feel that a background, transparent image might help out. The smaller icon images in the homepage might be a good opportunity to showcase nice photography of eyewear and such instead of silhouette icons. Again headed in a good direction, good work.

Re: Prelim. #2

Posted: Sat Nov 03, 2018 6:05 pm
by Jaime Ramey
I really like the 2nd design. It really looks like a official website. Have fun!
Jaime

Re: Prelim. #2

Posted: Sun Nov 04, 2018 5:35 pm
by clawson
I like the o1 design best, good layout, professional look. The photo seems to have a lot of yellow. I'd consider adding a curve to the photo for more of a white light rather than yellow.