Naked Roughs for project 2!!

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themeg98
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Re: Naked Roughs for project 2!!

Post by themeg98 »

I think the second set is less revealing which is better? the first is a little much in my opinion theres other ways of showing skin without seeming x rated.
Megan Horner
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hiitsyuri24
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Re: Naked Roughs for project 2!!

Post by hiitsyuri24 »

I like your drawings! I would make the buttons bold. They are kinds of hard to see right now.
Yuri Aoki

raton de biblioteca
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Re: Naked Roughs for project 2!!

Post by raton de biblioteca »

I like the ones with the blue eyed girl the most, but it is really difficult to see the font. Add some background contrast? Or Black font? I'm really wondering where the "shaving" link will take me! (lol)
Rachel Cao
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agostina_renau
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Re: Naked Roughs for project 2!!

Post by agostina_renau »

Your are a great digital artist and have accomplish very nice drawings, however, I don't get any massage/relaxing vibe from them.
Agostina From Argentina

Tickosity
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Re: Naked Roughs for project 2!!

Post by Tickosity »

I like the art style. I'm just getting lost in the art and I'm having a difficult time picking out the text. Possibly more contrast with the text?
Latham Furman

tandyg
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Re: Naked Roughs for project 2!!

Post by tandyg »

These are pretty neat animated designs. Great for the nudest theme. I like your style. I didn't pay attention to the navigation too much. Kinda distracted.
Tandy G
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Big_DaDdy
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Re: Naked Roughs for project 2!!

Post by Big_DaDdy »

I think that the massage aspect of this web layout gets lost. I would research classy, soothing massage imagery and work on implementing relaxing imagery into your layout.
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