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Re: My Project Critique. Give it to me straight.
Posted: Tue Feb 19, 2019 6:46 pm
by z1claudia
Hi, the top two are great. They have a fun 70's feel to them. Not much I can recommend here. The only thing is the text especially in the mobile seems like it could be easier to read maybe by lowering the picture's opacity just a bit but that's just a suggestion. I like what you did. It's a website that makes me curious to check out.
Re: My Project Critique. Give it to me straight.
Posted: Tue Feb 19, 2019 10:28 pm
by Tickosity
I think I prefer the simple pineapple design between the two. I'm just not too sure about the font you used for your name.
Re: My Project Critique. Give it to me straight.
Posted: Tue Feb 19, 2019 10:55 pm
by erino
I like your top design it has that outdoor theme look. Your name gets hard to read maybe you can play with the shadows or fonts.
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Re: My Project Critique. Give it to me straight.
Posted: Wed Feb 20, 2019 8:26 pm
by Jaime Ramey
Hi there,
I really like the pineapple design. I do think it might need a little more detail. I am sure you are planning on it. The colors are pretty cool too!
Jaime