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Re: Project 1

Posted: Tue Feb 19, 2019 5:43 pm
by z1claudia
Hi, I definitely like the creepy vibe your going for in your designs. I prefer the merry-go-round version just a bit more but I think the other would work as well. I just suggest that you make the font bigger in all the designs. The pictures you choose are cool but definitely take the attention from your text.

Re: Project 1

Posted: Tue Feb 19, 2019 8:16 pm
by Unicorn_Service
Both are very good. The color scheme is very dynamic. I do think the first design is better than the latter. The red text is too saturated and overwhelming.

Re: Project 1

Posted: Tue Feb 19, 2019 10:38 pm
by Tickosity
I like your carousel design, it is simple but eye catching. Kind of spooky with the dark image and the red and white text. However it might be difficult to read the body copy against the background image.