Project 1- roughs

[mack_schneider]

Fantastic designs! I really liked the color scheme for your second design. I noticed a lot of different type styles; it might be good to stick to a couple of your favorite styles to keep consistency.

[TheWalapus]

Hi Darrell, I think your clouds design is the strongest of the two. I like how you placed your project buttons on the clouds. It creates a very floaty feeling. The text on the outside edges have no space to breathe though and it detracts from the floaty feeling I think you're going for. If you give the text some more space I think it will improve your design a lot.

[Fear The Deer]

Howdy Darrell!
I like your second layouts color palette, the text colors work with it very well- I think since you have a hamburger menu on both layouts, you don't need the links free-floating on the home page. I think it would be cleaner to have it as just a title link or under the hamburger menu like your project page links.

[genesis_urena]

Hello!

Liking both of your designs. I would go for the colorful cloud. It just catches me more. I think the first one represents you very well. I will always play more with type. I think poping the cloud a little bit more will create enough contrast. Nice job

[Brandon_P]

I like your first design. I think you could use a little color below your toolbar on your first mobile design keep up the good work.

[Sugar_/\ppul]

Hey Darrell, my dude, I want to say this first, your mobile version of your second design looks like the cover to a romance novel and I love it. Your second design is very neat and everything fits so well with the image, text, color, and positioning. My suggestion is not have your text hugging the edge of the page, add some margins.