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Re: Project 1 Preliminary Critique

Posted: Tue Sep 17, 2019 8:11 pm
by Brandon_P
I like your first design. Try and use transparency on the box around your body copy, with a font that's no all caps and maybe justify your text.

Re: Project 1 Preliminary Critique

Posted: Tue Sep 17, 2019 8:25 pm
by mack_schneider
Your backgrounds are beautiful! I think it would be great to add some effects to your picture to give both images some depth and separation from each other.

Re: Project 1 Preliminary Critique

Posted: Wed Sep 18, 2019 1:07 pm
by Gr8K8
Both of these designs came out super clean! I love the imagery you used.
I do think I prefer the Trees layout slightly over the Mountain layout. I really like the effect you did on the text, also making it look like it's going in/out of the mist! I do think your nav buttons get a little lost on the computer version though. Perhaps consider shifting them left just slightly to be able to read them easier.

Re: Project 1 Preliminary Critique

Posted: Wed Sep 18, 2019 4:16 pm
by Fear The Deer
Hi Taylor!
Your imagery is really nice, and I think the white compliments it well- it makes me think of fresh air or fog, it's a nice clean impression. I think the project links on the first mobile layout would look better less spaced out from each other.

Re: Project 1 Preliminary Critique

Posted: Wed Sep 18, 2019 4:24 pm
by genesis_urena
Hello! Nice job over here.

I can't really choose one because I think both have ideas that if you combine will turn out very well. For example the navigation bar of your second rough and your first background will look interesting. I like the neatness on this. Very unify and understandable. I would play more with type and you can always take a little bit of the red on your picture and apply it somewhere in your design. It looks like a very friendly website. Really good job! :)

Re: Project 1 Preliminary Critique

Posted: Wed Sep 18, 2019 4:25 pm
by Paula B
Hi Taylor,

I like the simplicity of your designs. I think the second one works better I think because the first one kind of has a clash of too many bright colors. Other than that, the organization looks good.

Re: Project 1 Preliminary Critique

Posted: Wed Sep 18, 2019 7:30 pm
by Sugar_/\ppul
Hey Taylor, I like the general layout you have for these two designs! I do prefer solid color for the type instead of the gradient. I honestly don't know what else to say...the first design looks solid. For the mobile format the Web Design and Publishing is a bit too small.