hello,
I love the artwork in both designs. both are functional. the one with the little kid catches my eye more because of the layout and how you designed it.
great job
charmane
Project 01 Prelim Roughs
Re: Project 01 Prelim Roughs
I like your first design simple and clear to read. Its is missing the TMCC logo and on the mobile version if you have the links on the screen you don't really need the hamburger menu.
Brandon Plunkett
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Re: Project 01 Prelim Roughs
Hi Jessica! I love your artwork! Definitely show it off in your website. I think the font you used for your name in the second design would look really nice with your first composition. Otherwise, both designs are terrific!
Mackenzie Schneider
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Re: Project 01 Prelim Roughs
Hello Jessica, I love the illustration for the first design, and how the typeface looks drawn, and definitely the colors, they fit together so perfectly to create something cute.
I also like how your second design looks. That landscape creates a calming mood and makes me want to stay on the site.
I also like how your second design looks. That landscape creates a calming mood and makes me want to stay on the site.
~ Jessie Alanis
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Re: Project 01 Prelim Roughs
Hi Jessica! Both look really good. I like how you have consistency and unity in both designs. I would play more with type. I do find the landscape theme more like a serious personality when the cartoon presents me an animator personality. Well done!
GENESISURENA
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Re: Project 01 Prelim Roughs
Hi Jessica, both of your design looks great, I love your character it's fun and cute in the layout. The second layout looks beautiful it's the relaxing mood with the colors. I would recommend play with the type.
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