Hello Fellow Kirby Lover Trixia!!
I really like the look of these layouts. They are cute, but still really professional and straightforward. Super duper easy to read and navigate. And you've got an especially nice personal logo!
Changing the TMCC logo to white was a good choice I think. I do think I like the framing your white and black sections give your computer layout and kind of miss them in the mobile version. But still, I think your final designs turned out lovely!
Project One Final Critique
Re: Project One Final Critique
Kaitlin Wallberg
“I don't know half of you half as well as I should like; and I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve.”
― J.R.R. Tolkien, The Fellowship of the Ring
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IarF06JKANg
“I don't know half of you half as well as I should like; and I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve.”
― J.R.R. Tolkien, The Fellowship of the Ring
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IarF06JKANg
Re: Project One Final Critique
Good clean design, I like it. On your mobile design, you might want to lose the hamburger menu if you are going to have the toolbar at the bottom.
Brandon Plunkett
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Re: Project One Final Critique
Hi Trixia! Your critique is beautiful! The background, fonts, navigation it's clean and easy to read.
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Sandra Martinez
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Sandra Martinez
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Re: Project One Final Critique
Great job on the design! Your logo at the top is really neat, and I love the background you chose to work with.
Mackenzie Schneider