Project One Final Critique

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Gr8K8
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Re: Project One Final Critique

Post by Gr8K8 »

Hello Fellow Kirby Lover Trixia!! :P

I really like the look of these layouts. They are cute, but still really professional and straightforward. Super duper easy to read and navigate. And you've got an especially nice personal logo!
Changing the TMCC logo to white was a good choice I think. I do think I like the framing your white and black sections give your computer layout and kind of miss them in the mobile version. But still, I think your final designs turned out lovely!
Kaitlin Wallberg

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Brandon_P
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Re: Project One Final Critique

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Good clean design, I like it. On your mobile design, you might want to lose the hamburger menu if you are going to have the toolbar at the bottom.
Brandon Plunkett

smartinez33
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Re: Project One Final Critique

Post by smartinez33 »

Hi Trixia! Your critique is beautiful! The background, fonts, navigation it's clean and easy to read.
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Sandra Martinez

mack_schneider
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Re: Project One Final Critique

Post by mack_schneider »

Great job on the design! Your logo at the top is really neat, and I love the background you chose to work with.
Mackenzie Schneider

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