Re: final_critique_genesis_p01
Posted: Fri Oct 04, 2019 3:56 pm
Oh nice! I really like that new logo, Genesis. The font and backwards "Studio" were both strong choices.
This thing, as you would expect from it's theme, makes great use of contrast, especially in the gray sky above the zebras and the comparison of the black type content to the stripes on the zebras in the photo. For all that it's a little iffy on your computer layout, your background image really works well on your mobile layout. It's a very eye catching image and serves the overall design well. Both layouts utilize margin and proximity to provide a great hierarchy. Having the logo floating in it's own little area off to the left attracts the eye to it. Your navigation is big and usable on both layouts. Ordinarily, I wouldn't be a fan of the lack of color, but here it works, both because of the contrast and because of the visually interesting background image.
You used and interesting solution for your background image on your computer layout. Basically it looks like the way YouTube handles vertical video with a blurred copy of the video behind the vertical video. It was a good attempt, but it doesn't 100% work. I think you would have been better off using a different Zebra image for your computer layout. The image works fine on your mobile layout however.
Good work!
This thing, as you would expect from it's theme, makes great use of contrast, especially in the gray sky above the zebras and the comparison of the black type content to the stripes on the zebras in the photo. For all that it's a little iffy on your computer layout, your background image really works well on your mobile layout. It's a very eye catching image and serves the overall design well. Both layouts utilize margin and proximity to provide a great hierarchy. Having the logo floating in it's own little area off to the left attracts the eye to it. Your navigation is big and usable on both layouts. Ordinarily, I wouldn't be a fan of the lack of color, but here it works, both because of the contrast and because of the visually interesting background image.
You used and interesting solution for your background image on your computer layout. Basically it looks like the way YouTube handles vertical video with a blurred copy of the video behind the vertical video. It was a good attempt, but it doesn't 100% work. I think you would have been better off using a different Zebra image for your computer layout. The image works fine on your mobile layout however.
Good work!