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Re: (Fall, 2019) Project 03 Prelim Critique Roughs
Posted: Wed Oct 23, 2019 7:01 pm
by genesis_urena
Hello! Trixia. Honestly its a big-nice-good change the one you have done. Cause that page is full of content and crazy. I like the colors you have chose. You give it a little of professionalism. It catches me more the version #1. But still the green one have cool ideas, like the gallery over there.
Re: (Fall, 2019) Project 03 Prelim Critique Roughs
Posted: Wed Oct 23, 2019 8:14 pm
by smartinez33
Hi Trixia! Your two design is great it's clear and organize especially the colors that are blending well. I really like the second layout. Nice job!
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Sandra Martinez
Re: (Fall, 2019) Project 03 Prelim Critique Roughs
Posted: Wed Oct 23, 2019 9:14 pm
by mack_schneider
I think your colors in the first design work really well together! The about page is extremely creative with how you used your imagery with the actual page itself.
Re: (Fall, 2019) Project 03 Prelim Critique Roughs
Posted: Wed Oct 23, 2019 11:22 pm
by Sugar_/\ppul
Hey Trixia, I say definitely go with the first design. The inclusion of that missile closely matches the absurdness with the original website, please keep it haha. Overall I really like how much space there is in your first design that gives the viewers a chance to breathe. I am also digging the orange and blue color scheme you got there. Great job.