Re: Project One Prelim
Posted: Mon Feb 15, 2021 12:12 am
Alright Angela, now you've done it. Blue is my favorite color and usually I favor blue designs, but somehow, SOMEHOW, you've made me like the warm orange-brown design better. What did you do?
But seriously, I DO like the warm one better. The reds, browns, and tans look like old wood. Makes the entire thing feel like an inlaid wood table with a lot of patina. I especially like the inlay effect you did with your logo. It helps sell the whole feel. the rustic inly feel works well with your imagery, too. Great picture choice, BTW. It really brings out a kind of gentle coffee house feel. I can almost hear it looking at that image. The whole thing has a rustic, welcoming feel that brings me in and makes me feel welcome. Your serif type helps with that also. It looks like your two fonts are agreeing nicely with each other. Your navigation is easy to see and use and is well placed. I also like the strips to the left of the image on your computer version. Like the kind of detail a dresser might have.
I'd recommend enlarging your bodycopy and it's container on your mobile version. It's super tiny. The black TMCC logo and social media are a little jarring, maybe try them in a dark brown instead.
Nice work!
But seriously, I DO like the warm one better. The reds, browns, and tans look like old wood. Makes the entire thing feel like an inlaid wood table with a lot of patina. I especially like the inlay effect you did with your logo. It helps sell the whole feel. the rustic inly feel works well with your imagery, too. Great picture choice, BTW. It really brings out a kind of gentle coffee house feel. I can almost hear it looking at that image. The whole thing has a rustic, welcoming feel that brings me in and makes me feel welcome. Your serif type helps with that also. It looks like your two fonts are agreeing nicely with each other. Your navigation is easy to see and use and is well placed. I also like the strips to the left of the image on your computer version. Like the kind of detail a dresser might have.
I'd recommend enlarging your bodycopy and it's container on your mobile version. It's super tiny. The black TMCC logo and social media are a little jarring, maybe try them in a dark brown instead.
Nice work!