Re: Project 1 Preliminary Critique
Posted: Mon Feb 15, 2021 9:09 pm
Hi Kendall,
Great concepts! They're both very fun! I like you're second design the most though. I'm having a hard time with your circular photo and the pointy shape in the back. They kinda clash and I think it would look best if you were to put your photo in that cool shape or leave it in that circle and get rid of the other shape. Also, make sure that the "Hi, I'm Kendall," part is aligned to the text and that both the web and mobile versions have the same alignment. One last thing, I would also change the color of the Tmcc logo because right now the purple and the green make a contrast that makes it hard to read. Great Job! Excited to see your final website
Great concepts! They're both very fun! I like you're second design the most though. I'm having a hard time with your circular photo and the pointy shape in the back. They kinda clash and I think it would look best if you were to put your photo in that cool shape or leave it in that circle and get rid of the other shape. Also, make sure that the "Hi, I'm Kendall," part is aligned to the text and that both the web and mobile versions have the same alignment. One last thing, I would also change the color of the Tmcc logo because right now the purple and the green make a contrast that makes it hard to read. Great Job! Excited to see your final website