Re: Project01 Preliminary Critique! Take a Look!
Posted: Mon Feb 15, 2021 2:03 pm
"Take a look. It's in a book ..."
Oh my! Three designs! I always appreciate students going the extra mile. I like your third one best, though it was very close between that one and your Purple Mountains Majesty first design. It was the contrast that sold me in the end.
Actually, the best part of your third design is how you use color. The color scheme you've picked is super visually pleasing. I like the embedded color frames that reverse inside out around your image. Sort of a visual shorthand for how HTML works. The colors make for great differentials in your footer and as your rollover color. Using your header and footer as framing devices is also visually strong. It pushes the eye toward the middle. I like your choice of imagery as well. It's very evocative and works well with your colorscheme as well as the contemplative mood you've established in this design. The little bits of texture you added help add a touch of visual interest as well. I especially like the transparency in your "Back to Top" arrow. You navigation placement is excellent too. The navigation is easy to see and use.
The only thing I'm not sold on is the white title card in the middle. You have this great contrasting design and yet right smack dab in the middle is this pretty basic little card layout. It clashes with the great colors and contrast you've established with the rest of the design. I think once you apply a bit of design magic to the title card, this one will be a really great design. Also, don't forget to vertically center your footer type and social media icons.
Great work!
Oh my! Three designs! I always appreciate students going the extra mile. I like your third one best, though it was very close between that one and your Purple Mountains Majesty first design. It was the contrast that sold me in the end.
Actually, the best part of your third design is how you use color. The color scheme you've picked is super visually pleasing. I like the embedded color frames that reverse inside out around your image. Sort of a visual shorthand for how HTML works. The colors make for great differentials in your footer and as your rollover color. Using your header and footer as framing devices is also visually strong. It pushes the eye toward the middle. I like your choice of imagery as well. It's very evocative and works well with your colorscheme as well as the contemplative mood you've established in this design. The little bits of texture you added help add a touch of visual interest as well. I especially like the transparency in your "Back to Top" arrow. You navigation placement is excellent too. The navigation is easy to see and use.
The only thing I'm not sold on is the white title card in the middle. You have this great contrasting design and yet right smack dab in the middle is this pretty basic little card layout. It clashes with the great colors and contrast you've established with the rest of the design. I think once you apply a bit of design magic to the title card, this one will be a really great design. Also, don't forget to vertically center your footer type and social media icons.
Great work!