Project Three Preliminary Critique

[comicsansfanclub]

Hi Arisa,

Very Nice job! Both of your designs are so sleek and aesthetically pleasing. I love how you put the water within the type. It's as if the type are windows, like looking into an aquarium. This already so good, I can't wait to see what else you come up with for the final. I'm excited.

[Mal-Festio]

Hello Arisa,

Both of these designs are really great. I think either of them can work for the website but for your message In think the lighter color scheme and the masked text of the second works best.

[kendall_the_mann]

Hi Arisa!

Your designs are so unique! I absolutely love the idea of hovering your mouse and having the background change with it, that is so cool! I think I definitely favor your second design, its very clean and I love the masking technique you used!

Amazing ideas and designs!

[aka_fefi]

Hey Arisa,

I LOVEEE your second design. I think it's simple but so strong. It's a really clean design and I'm excited to see where you go with it. I think the drop down menu is a good idea to keep the integrity of your overall design. I would definitely go with that one.

[rmepinero]

Hi Arisa,

I think your creativity behind the first design is super strong but would probably be hard to navigate for a first time viewer. I still really love the idea though. The second one Is really clean, simple, and I like how you used the mask on it. I think it’s a good direction so far.