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Re: Project Three Preliminary Critique
Posted: Thu Apr 01, 2021 7:28 pm
by comicsansfanclub
Hi Arisa,
Very Nice job! Both of your designs are so sleek and aesthetically pleasing. I love how you put the water within the type. It's as if the type are windows, like looking into an aquarium. This already so good, I can't wait to see what else you come up with for the final. I'm excited.
Re: Project Three Preliminary Critique
Posted: Thu Apr 01, 2021 8:52 pm
by Mal-Festio
Hello Arisa,
Both of these designs are really great. I think either of them can work for the website but for your message In think the lighter color scheme and the masked text of the second works best.
Re: Project Three Preliminary Critique
Posted: Thu Apr 01, 2021 10:22 pm
by kendall_the_mann
Hi Arisa!
Your designs are so unique! I absolutely love the idea of hovering your mouse and having the background change with it, that is so cool! I think I definitely favor your second design, its very clean and I love the masking technique you used!
Amazing ideas and designs!
Re: Project Three Preliminary Critique
Posted: Fri Apr 02, 2021 11:54 am
by aka_fefi
Hey Arisa,
I LOVEEE your second design. I think it's simple but so strong. It's a really clean design and I'm excited to see where you go with it. I think the drop down menu is a good idea to keep the integrity of your overall design. I would definitely go with that one.
Re: Project Three Preliminary Critique
Posted: Fri Apr 02, 2021 5:41 pm
by rmepinero
Hi Arisa,
I think your creativity behind the first design is super strong but would probably be hard to navigate for a first time viewer. I still really love the idea though. The second one Is really clean, simple, and I like how you used the mask on it. I think it’s a good direction so far.