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Re: Project 1 Prelims and such
Posted: Tue Feb 15, 2022 10:24 am
by Mike_Chavez123
Your dog giraffe is amazing! Silly, this is great! It’s real creative, I’d pick matching zoo layouts for this one.
Re: Project 1 Prelims and such
Posted: Tue Feb 15, 2022 3:11 pm
by lilykmitch
Hi Kevin
I like your first concept more and i like the layouts you have especially the one for the desktop version. If I were to do anything different i might crop your image a little differently to make t more uniform.
Re: Project 1 Prelims and such
Posted: Tue Feb 15, 2022 6:36 pm
by James Hill
Hello Kevin,
WOW these are some striking designs. I would have never came up with such creative designs and I applauded you for that. I really like your giraffe design alot. I do think it still looks a little rough and would love to see where you go with the design. Your font choice doesn't match the crazy design much so I think go out there and find one that better matches. Your first design is cool but very blue, I like the layout the most out of those design. Great Job.
Re: Project 1 Prelims and such
Posted: Tue Feb 15, 2022 9:09 pm
by zandrews
Hi Kevin!
Both of your layouts made me laugh (in the best way of course). I love how your personality shines through on both sets yet both are very different in terms of layout and organization. Although the picture of you is hilarious, I prefer the second layout just in terms of aesthetic and the giraffe dog with the tennis ball is awesome. I will say the first set, the desktop version seems more accurate to the specs indicated on the assignment sheet but that could just be because the second set's is longer. Also your first set does a good job of rearranging the navigation where as the second set, even though I prefer it, is pretty identical to the mobile. Granted both sets are not drastically different when comparing the mobile and the desktop versions but there just seems to be a tad more variation in thew first set.
My advice would be to properly trim the bottom of your picture if you go with option but whether you go with 1 or 2, try playing with the layout a bit more with the mobile to make it more unique from the desktop. Great start here and looking forward to seeing what you do with either one these.
Re: Project 1 Prelims and such
Posted: Tue Feb 15, 2022 9:14 pm
by TSUL
Hello,
of the two designs I think the second was the most successful! I like the color choices and the simple clean layout of all the material. It is very easy to navigate! I also like the imagery you used with the giraffe dog, it is an easy portrayal of some personality incorporated into the page! Good Start!
-Tyler Sullivan
Re: Project 1 Prelims and such
Posted: Tue Feb 15, 2022 11:53 pm
by yenny
Hey Kevin!
I think you got some great ideas going on here! I love how each design has a theme. They both remind me of 90's movies and I love that! I especially like the giraffe dog! Design-wise I think both of them got potential. Just be careful with the spacing of everything and differentiate the websites from mobile designs. I also like how you're giving space for the projects and really making sure the viewers can read and see it. I just can't stop starring at the giraffe dog!