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Re: Prim

Posted: Tue Feb 15, 2022 10:15 am
by Mike_Chavez123
I like this one, real bar like. I like bars, caught my attention. I’d arrange it to look more keen and ideal to locals at their local bars and lounge areas.

Re: Prim

Posted: Tue Feb 15, 2022 2:19 pm
by lilykmitch
Hi Yen!
Youre so funny I love your theme of drinking and fruits. I think that does represent your fun and bright personality too. My favorite of your two concepts is the second one. I really love that picture you chose it is so beautiful and the colors are so cool. I like how you chose to put your name in the bright orange color and have blue for the body copy. If I were to do anything differently it would to be just work on the mobile layout but other than that I really like it!

Re: Prim

Posted: Tue Feb 15, 2022 6:12 pm
by James Hill
Hi Yen,
Cool website designs. I like tho color choice for the first design and how it works with your images. Fun imagery in the top bar really brings everything together. The font could be a bit more fun but the legibility works well. I like the second design also though I suggest continuing with the first design. The mobile would be where you should work more on I think the second design is really nice though.

Re: Prim

Posted: Tue Feb 15, 2022 7:57 pm
by Ericha Eberhart
Hi Yen! I like both of your designs and the fun airy feeling both of them give off! I think I prefer the second design as it feels less crowded, I think my critique would have to be to take out or turn down the opacity of one of the images so they do not feel like they are fighting as much. Nice start!

Re: Prim

Posted: Tue Feb 15, 2022 9:02 pm
by TSUL
Hello,
I like how both of your designs came out! I like the colors in the first one and the banner of fruit going across the top but, I don't think the green type on top of the green background is very legible. Other than that the first one looks really good!
For the second one, I really love the complimentary colors you used especially when it came to the type with that one! The orange and the blue make a great contrast between everything making the design overall easy to navigate. Good Job!

-Tyler Sullivan