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Re: Final

Posted: Fri Mar 04, 2022 12:51 pm
by piratek
I like the levels you are playing with here with images and text. The one thing I am unsure of is why the font color changed between the two versions.

Re: Final

Posted: Fri Mar 04, 2022 2:38 pm
by lilykmitch
Hi Yen
I still love that image with the wine glasses those colors are so pleasing. Your desktop version is amazing too i like how you brought in a dark blue for all your type instead of just sticking with black!!

Re: Final

Posted: Fri Mar 04, 2022 3:26 pm
by squidgola33
I really like the revisions you've made especially the hamburger bar vibe you have going. I really think the pages tie together very well and look great. they look very professional and cohesive.

Re: Final

Posted: Fri Mar 04, 2022 7:02 pm
by Lucky_Penny
Hi Yen

The colors of your pages are warm and inviting which I love! Are you planning on going with straight black text or the blue and orange text you have in the web layout? If you do go with the blue and orange just keep in mind those are contrasting colors

Re: Final

Posted: Fri Mar 04, 2022 7:22 pm
by Elle Barre
Hi Yen, Ooh, I wish we could still see the befores. You changed something major ... Didn't the picture used to take up the whole screen? I had a visceral response to that layout: it was complete immersion in the art on your splash page. It is cut in half now, so the image is much smaller (I will have to eat my hat if you show me that I remembering this wrong: completely possible!). The image is still so pleasing and simple, so much free space (free, not empty: the wrinkled tablecloth is there, suggesting so many many possible scenarios where those wines are set). There was something different about your colors too, the font color maybe, something tied your headline so beautifully with your imagery in your preliminary. Whatever you HAD was more impactful to me, so memorable. And, I believe there was a successful 'sameness" between the pc and mobile versions, where here there's the big difference in headline font color. If I had not seen what you had before, which was perfection, imo, I would still appreciate you artistic hand in this layout, too. I'm a little confused by the very different headline font color change between the pc and mobile version. I go now to mourn the loss of the prelim version, I loved it. :- )

Re: Final

Posted: Fri Mar 04, 2022 8:07 pm
by James Hill
Hello Yen,
I like your page designs. I think your web design works really well and the use of the cup is great also. Your color choice is fun the blue is a bit hard to read though the red text really is great. Wonderful designs you have.

Re: Final

Posted: Fri Mar 04, 2022 8:14 pm
by TSUL
Hi Yen,

I really like how clean and aesthetically pleasing your design is! there is a great contrast between your header and the background, and the type you used was also very nice!

-Tyler

Re: Final

Posted: Fri Mar 04, 2022 9:08 pm
by Ericha Eberhart
Hi Yen!
I like the top picture with the style of your name, it gives a very relaxed feeling. I'm not sure you need the bottom picture as it makes things feel a little disjointed. I think you have something really strong going on with everything already, it looks great!