final_critique_project01

[Meghna_Misson]

Hey Mike,
I really enjoy your approach to switching up the styles for both formats, and that your character shines through more on the mobile one! I especially find this one really cool and visually interesting because of how it reminds me of scrapbooking/collaging. Although, I do wonder how your links will look like in the giant rectangle on top (I think that this spot might be better for your body paragraph instead, and the links could be placed on the sticky note). My only suggestions for both designs are: making the body paragraph in the computer-sized design not close to touching both edges of the pink rectangle and maybe incorporating some of the style used for the mobile version for the computer one to create some sense of consistency for the user to depend on. But other than that, I really do like this approach! Maybe you could also include some animated gifs and etc. when the website is developed further! Great work!

[James Hill]

Hi Mike,
I really like your design, I think its a cool retro type design. The color choice is my favorite part. I love your mobile design. Would say fix the TMCC logo as there is a version given thats dosent have that white background.

[Lucky_Penny]

Hi Mike

Your designs are so uniquely different I'm not sure which one I like more. I like the colors you have so far, but a basic palette might help make your layouts more cohesive.

[lilykmitch]

Hi Mike
I like all the bright crazy colors you're using these are really cool looking. I think your layouts are really coming along well too! I think making both of the versions be more like the desktop would make this even better.

[TSUL]

Hey Mike,

Your designs are very interesting to say the least. I like the contrast throughout and the imagery, it is a bit overwhelming and hard to understand what is trying to be portrayed, but the are coming along.

-Tyler

[Ericha Eberhart]

Hi Mike!
I think your body copy is very readable and you have a good sense of hierarchy in your headers and subheaders. You do however have a lot of different styles and colors mixing here and it makes things a little crazy. The type is great!