Re: final_critique_project01
Posted: Fri Mar 04, 2022 5:34 pm
Hey Mike,
I really enjoy your approach to switching up the styles for both formats, and that your character shines through more on the mobile one! I especially find this one really cool and visually interesting because of how it reminds me of scrapbooking/collaging. Although, I do wonder how your links will look like in the giant rectangle on top (I think that this spot might be better for your body paragraph instead, and the links could be placed on the sticky note). My only suggestions for both designs are: making the body paragraph in the computer-sized design not close to touching both edges of the pink rectangle and maybe incorporating some of the style used for the mobile version for the computer one to create some sense of consistency for the user to depend on. But other than that, I really do like this approach! Maybe you could also include some animated gifs and etc. when the website is developed further! Great work!
I really enjoy your approach to switching up the styles for both formats, and that your character shines through more on the mobile one! I especially find this one really cool and visually interesting because of how it reminds me of scrapbooking/collaging. Although, I do wonder how your links will look like in the giant rectangle on top (I think that this spot might be better for your body paragraph instead, and the links could be placed on the sticky note). My only suggestions for both designs are: making the body paragraph in the computer-sized design not close to touching both edges of the pink rectangle and maybe incorporating some of the style used for the mobile version for the computer one to create some sense of consistency for the user to depend on. But other than that, I really do like this approach! Maybe you could also include some animated gifs and etc. when the website is developed further! Great work!