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Re: PROJECT01_FINAL

Posted: Fri Mar 04, 2022 2:06 pm
by Fatkid53
Hello,
I think you have an incredibly dynamic design here with alot of information both visual and through text. I enjoy the color palette and the realistic background you used to create the background. That being said I wonder if there isn't too much information? Inherently I look first at the computer screen, but the screen isn't really integrated into the UI so it kind of a false flag image, we all react to it but it doesn't function. The second thing I would tinker with would be the other at the bottom of the page, it really doesn't fit the hierarchy of your design, it actually captures my attention before the justified left menu bar so it holds sway over the UI design. Maybe a smaller less bold format for the third tier nav and possibly simplifying the design and making the computer screen interactive. Good luck moving forward its a rad design.
James

Re: PROJECT01_FINAL

Posted: Fri Mar 04, 2022 3:52 pm
by squidgola33
I think this looks fantastic. I'm not sure if you are the person on the background of the computer but that was a very unique touch. I like the backdrop you used because its the typical designer workplace. the concept is very well achieved.

Re: PROJECT01_FINAL

Posted: Fri Mar 04, 2022 5:19 pm
by Meghna_Misson
Hey Tyler,
I really enjoy how you had created an environment within this design, and how your name and logo are placed all around in the background subtly without conflicting with any of the elements in the front. Everything also appears very well balanced and organized--great sense of hierarchy! As far as critiques, I don't have any because I think you satisfy all the project's requirements and made a website that successfully showcases you and your work. Great job!

Re: PROJECT01_FINAL

Posted: Fri Mar 04, 2022 7:12 pm
by James Hill
Hello Tyler,
I think your designs are amazing a little busy but still amazing. I like the concept as a whole. Not too much to say as you seem to be down pat with your design. The best outta the two is your web design.

Re: PROJECT01_FINAL

Posted: Fri Mar 04, 2022 7:23 pm
by Ericha Eberhart
Hi Tyler!
As I said last time I am loving this design! I think your attention to detail really comes across well in this layout and is great for showing your strengths as a designer. You also have a lot of small pops of color throughout, and I think they are great for moving the eye through the design. Nice Work!

Re: PROJECT01_FINAL

Posted: Fri Mar 04, 2022 8:04 pm
by lilykmitch
Hi Tyler
I like what you did with it! its so much easier to read now and it looks 10x better even though it was already good! This is super clever and really nicely done!