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Re: project 1 final
Posted: Fri Mar 04, 2022 3:15 pm
by squidgola33
I really like how your name looks, very neat way to display your name. I really like the overall look there just seems to be a lot of empty space throughout both of the designs.
Re: project 1 final
Posted: Fri Mar 04, 2022 3:33 pm
by Meghna_Misson
Hey Kristen,
I'm glad that you had gone with this design because it works wonderfully for this project! That is probably the main reason why I'm having a hard time as well trying to suggest its critiques because I can't find any fault with this whatsoever. It's absolutely stunning! You had satisfied every requirement for the project well and had ended up with a playful and very visually pleasing web design to where I can't wait to test it out once it's fully developed. Great work!
Re: project 1 final
Posted: Fri Mar 04, 2022 7:47 pm
by James Hill
Hey Kristen,
See you went with my favorite of the two designs. Color choice is great for the background but the text gets hard to read. I like the layout of your design and the spilling out text. The stretched TMCC logo is a bit weird to look at. Great job though.
Re: project 1 final
Posted: Fri Mar 04, 2022 7:51 pm
by TSUL
Hi Kristen,
I really like the movement throughout your compositions, I also really like the contrast between the blue and the yellow, nothing is getting lost it is legible and not too overwhelming!
-Tyler
Re: project 1 final
Posted: Fri Mar 04, 2022 7:52 pm
by lilykmitch
Hi Kiristin
I think this is really cute and fun. The colors go really well with each other and the jumbled letters of your name at the bottom look really great! I think the layout is really nice as well! awesome job
Re: project 1 final
Posted: Fri Mar 04, 2022 9:38 pm
by Ericha Eberhart
Hi Kristen!
I like your contrasting colors and think you have established some great hierarchy with your headers and subheads. Nice use of texture as well!
Re: project 1 final
Posted: Fri Mar 04, 2022 9:41 pm
by Elle Barre
Hi Kirsten. It's a big ask for me to ignore the last color in the crayon box I would choose for any thing but an S.O.S. sign, but, contrasting it with the green of your project buttons and those few letters calls me to 'hang on', and look harder. Interesting pattern in back... I'm confused why you'd use the letter jumble... but as I wonder this, I am thinking, 'oh, are your letters falling into the 'shaft' created by the pattern behind it? THAT would be cool, to play up that relationship, though I don't think it would a good look for your name letters to be falling down a shaft... Idk. I'm really searching here, I'm sorry. It is well organized, good groupings of info, nice TMCC bug in the corner there. In different colors, I don't think I would be struggling to like this... the color is the only thing about it I really don't like: the rest, I LIKE. :- )