Re: Project04 Prelim
Posted: Fri May 06, 2022 10:16 pm
Hey James,
In your first concept, I actually find the green neon bar too distracting and pulls away from the information in the center, so the second design has got to be in my favor. I also do like how you decreased some of the elements on screen to where it doesn't bombard the viewer and retains their attention--great design work!
In your first concept, I actually find the green neon bar too distracting and pulls away from the information in the center, so the second design has got to be in my favor. I also do like how you decreased some of the elements on screen to where it doesn't bombard the viewer and retains their attention--great design work!