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Re: Project01 Preliminary Critique
Posted: Mon Feb 13, 2023 6:10 pm
by bmeyer
Hi Kelsey!
I really love both of your designs! I like the color scheme and photo you chose for the first one and the expressive type you chose for the second one.
My only advice would be to combine aspects of both into one because they are both very strong. Good job!
-Bella
Re: Project01 Preliminary Critique
Posted: Tue Feb 14, 2023 2:47 pm
by lil_cactux
Great work Kelsey!
Both of your layouts look so professional, and they are so different! I like the one on the bottom more just because of how fun it is but the one on the top looks super professional. IDK! Hard to choose a favorite. Well done!
Re: Project01 Preliminary Critique
Posted: Tue Feb 14, 2023 8:23 pm
by NMartz
Hello Kelsey,
I like both designs but am definitely liking the second more. The colors in the second one work very nicely. The fonts you chose are good. Everything works. I think using more of the empty space on the right side of the web layout would be good. Nice work.
Re: Project01 Preliminary Critique
Posted: Tue Feb 14, 2023 9:24 pm
by Mars_Sink
Hi Kelsey,
I love your funky font on the second design! Your work is always consistently breaking the mold. You always have this distinct style that I appreciate. I also like your muted colors, however, I would love to see more colors, still muted but maybe a sage green or soft orange.
Re: Project01 Preliminary Critique
Posted: Tue Feb 14, 2023 10:59 pm
by nancyrey143
Hi Kelsey!
I'm digging the second design a lot! The use of your font along with the type you used really gives out the groovy vibe of the website. The only thing I would change is maybe putting the email in the contact me tab, and possibly adding another color like blue or orange. Overall these look great, and I'm looking forward to what you pick.