project_one_preliminary_01

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NMartz
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Re: project_one_preliminary_01

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Hello Keaton,
All of these designs look very nice. The colors all work nicely and all of the fonts are good. Good work! If I had to choose, it would probably be the first of your roughs.
- Nick Martinez 8-)

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Mars_Sink
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Re: project_one_preliminary_01

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Hey Keaton!

Your work reminds me of a book cover to me, its super relaxing and the color combo reminds me of the Shel Silverstein's books. I would love to see more of your personality through out the front page, maybe little illustrations in the background of the webpage.
- Mars Sink

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kaiyote03
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Seasons Greetings Keaton!

I really enjoy the colors on your designs. I think that the second layout works well since the background meshes well with your logo in terms of style. I would create some space or make another pop down circle thing that you have for your references since you don't have them. I think you should explore some other typestyles for your name as it is really struggling to stand out and the type face in my opinion is very boring to look at.

Keep it up! (* ̄3 ̄)╭
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Hinata_Sato
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Re: project_one_preliminary_01

Post by Hinata_Sato »

Hi Keaton!
I like both of the designs! I think both of the layouts are working pretty well. I like how both of them are really simple and how professional it looks. Personally, I like the bottom one more because of the background's layout and texture. I also like how you change the texture for the mobile version and the logo you added. It makes the website look more professional and simple. The only critique I have for your designs is the typestyle. I think the fonts look a little plain. If you could change the typestyle for your name to something more decorative, I think it will look better and add your character to it. Nice work and Good luck! ;)
Hinata Sato

nancyrey143
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Re: project_one_preliminary_01

Post by nancyrey143 »

Hi Keaton,
I'm liking the first layout a bit more for the mixing of your green tones. It works really
well in your mobile app. I would just make the GRC 175 and TMCC sections a soft green color. Overall, great job.
:)

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