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Re: Preliminary Critique Project 1

Posted: Tue Feb 14, 2023 9:32 pm
by Erikatsukamoto
Hey Nick! These look really good. I think I would chose the first design because I like the colors more and the background. Maybe try adding some shapes? Nice job.

Re: Preliminary Critique Project 1

Posted: Wed Feb 15, 2023 2:16 am
by Hinata_Sato
Hello Nick,
I like the second design a lot! The colors work really well and I think you have a unique layout with the web layout, especially with the bar for the projects and resources although I think it will look better when all three of them are centered. For this layout, I would make the font size of the body copy smaller to "breathe" and make your name bigger to create a hierarchy in your work. I think the mobile layout is working well too and I like how you make it simple. Nice work!:)