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Re: Project 1 Final
Posted: Fri Mar 03, 2023 9:24 pm
by kaiyote03
Hi Jenna,
Love the theme and colors of your designs. A critique I have is that I wish that you didn't use the transparent boxes but instead use those wavy objects that you used everywhere else.
Good work!
Re: Project 1 Final
Posted: Fri Mar 03, 2023 10:28 pm
by Erikatsukamoto
Hey Jenna! WOW I really love the design that you made here!! Your background image is so strong, and I think the shapes and the color of the shapes that you have go with your image so well and make this such a good design. The only thing I might change is making your body copy just a little bit bigger on your phone design so that its easier to read. Really nice job!!
Re: Project 1 Final
Posted: Fri Mar 03, 2023 11:43 pm
by kevin_ksk
Hey Jenna!
You have a very creative layout! I like the colors. Your logo is very cool and I like the psychedelic vibe generally. Your layout is a bit strange with the navigation being on the left and right. I would add that stuff all at the top where you have a lot of space