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Re: Project 1 Final
Posted: Fri Mar 03, 2023 6:46 pm
by Erikatsukamoto
Hey Mars! I really like what you ended up going with for this design! Your colors work so well together and give off a vintage vibe that I am really liking. The only thing that I would change is maybe incorporating your logo that you have on your phone design into your web design as well. Really nice job!!
Re: Project 1 Final
Posted: Fri Mar 03, 2023 8:50 pm
by nancyrey143
Hi Mars!
This looks so cool! The only thing I would change would be to make the body copy not in all caps. But besides that, this is such a unique design
Re: Project 1 Final
Posted: Fri Mar 03, 2023 9:05 pm
by kaiyote03
Bueno Dias Mars!
Love the design. The colors work really well with each other and the roundness of the elements. Your mars image looks a bit weird to me mostly because of the blue dots that are on it and so it comes off like a red velvet cupcake with sprinkles on it.
Amazing work! (o゜▽゜)o☆
Re: Project 1 Final
Posted: Sat Mar 04, 2023 12:08 am
by kevin_ksk
Hey Mars!
I really like the creativity of your layout! It’s very unique and stylish. I would choose a more minimal font and not have it in all caps. There’s too much negative space in the mobile layout at the bottom. Besides that I see there’s a lot of creativity and personalization that went into this!