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Re: Project 01 Final

Posted: Fri Mar 03, 2023 10:29 pm
by Instructor
These came out really good, Nick. I don't have to ask what your favorite baseball team is. Lol!

Good selection on your photo. It says a lot about you and is visually interesting. Lowkey though, the best part? That's your use of alignment. Every edge aligns with every other edge. You're creating lines that aren't there all over the place. Good colors too. The work well together. The Giants design people sure know what they're doing. I like your use of orange for the navigation. Draws your eye right to it. Makes it easy to see and use. I like the fact you used one typeface and just use different weights of it to establish hieracrchy.

The only area where the design breaks down ever so slightly is your footer on your computer layout. It's a little too close to the bottom and the right of your layout and it's left edge breaks the alignment of your name, header, and bodycopy above it.

Excellent work!

Re: Project 01 Final

Posted: Fri Mar 03, 2023 10:36 pm
by Erikatsukamoto
Hey Nick! I really enjoy the final design that you came up with. I think it looks very professional and is straight to the point. The color that you have for this design is right on point and looks really nice. The only thing I would change is moving your name to the left a bit to match the margins of the rest of the text below it on your phone design. Great work!! :D

Re: Project 01 Final

Posted: Fri Mar 03, 2023 11:40 pm
by kevin_ksk
Hey Nick!



Your site is very clean. Very easy to navigate. I would maybe try a san serif font for the body text to be more readable. The orange navigation bar is visually interesting!

Re: Project 01 Final

Posted: Mon Mar 06, 2023 7:20 pm
by keatonbeatty
Nick,
I love the simplicity of your design and how well all of the elements are working together! If I were to give any further suggestions I would probably say maybe work on lining things up with each other so its easier for the eye to flow and get all of the information your page has to offer. Sweet design though, and I love the orange!