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Re: Spring 2023_Proj3 Prelim Crit_Reno Buggie Barn
Posted: Tue Apr 04, 2023 8:54 pm
by lil_cactux
Hey Johnna,
Great re-designs! They look fantastic! I am partial to the first layout because of its easy readability. I can't see anything I would change.. well done!
Re: Spring 2023_Proj3 Prelim Crit_Reno Buggie Barn
Posted: Tue Apr 04, 2023 9:03 pm
by S_Osmar
Hey Johnna, I really like the way you incorporated the artwork of the site in your second design. Your layouts are really nice, but I think the icons in the navigation bar could be moved up a bit to appear more aligned, as well as making them a bit bigger. Great work!
Re: Spring 2023_Proj3 Prelim Crit_Reno Buggie Barn
Posted: Tue Apr 04, 2023 9:56 pm
by nancyrey143
Hi Johnna,
These are really bold designs, especially with the type, these look so cool! I'm leaning toward the first one. I would just make the nav elements a bit larger. Overall, great job!
Re: Spring 2023_Proj3 Prelim Crit_Reno Buggie Barn
Posted: Tue Apr 04, 2023 11:00 pm
by Hinata_Sato
Hi Johnna,
I love both of the designs a lot!! I love the illustration of the car and the font for the name of the website. Both of them can be great websites and I think you did a great job redesigning them. My favorite will is the first one. I think the colors and the gradient on the background look really nice and it works really well with the illustration you have. Great work!
Re: Spring 2023_Proj3 Prelim Crit_Reno Buggie Barn
Posted: Wed Apr 05, 2023 1:19 pm
by megan_thompson2
Hi Johnna,
I really like your redesign. I like the second rough for the landing page as it has a little bit more imagery on it. But it would be cool to include the bigger purple bug from the first rough in the background, with less opacity, maybe? The colors from the first rough really compliment each other as well. For the contact page I like the first rough.