Project 01 Preliminary Critique

[onnimelon]

black and white looks much clear. I like how you used the font in a playful way with the black banner. Almost looks like a business card almost. Very clean and minimal

[jillian_rodgers]

Hi Taylor!
I really enjoy the simplicity of your designs and the use of black and white to create a clean look. The only critique I have is to make a small "hamburger" menu on your mobile designs so there is less clutter. Other than that, great job!

[shasta_cola]

Hi, Taylor!

I agree with the people who like the black-and-white version of your design. Like Giselle said, there is great hierarchy, and the square photo frame somehow makes you look more professional. It honestly gives me "famous author" vibes.

For the mobile design on the black and white version, I would love to see your first and last name offset like it is in the computer version. You would have to make the text a little smaller to fit, but I think it's worth it for the sake of continuity.