Re: Project 01 Preliminary Critique
Posted: Fri Sep 08, 2023 10:10 pm
Hi Nathan,
really like so you the signs but the one that draws my eye the most is your second I really enjoyed the simplicity of your day's eye while still making it very visually appealing. I like how everything is very clear really organized and has very your information block one way I think you could improve upon this design is your placement of the logo and your name I feel that your name should probably be one of the bigger parts considering it is showcasing all of your work. the placement of the lines really draws your eye through the website without being too overpowering. they both look awesome.
really like so you the signs but the one that draws my eye the most is your second I really enjoyed the simplicity of your day's eye while still making it very visually appealing. I like how everything is very clear really organized and has very your information block one way I think you could improve upon this design is your placement of the logo and your name I feel that your name should probably be one of the bigger parts considering it is showcasing all of your work. the placement of the lines really draws your eye through the website without being too overpowering. they both look awesome.