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Re: Project01 Final

Posted: Fri Sep 29, 2023 4:56 pm
by Joey_Escalera
Hi Chloe! Your design is so fun! Love the paper background texture, and overall theme of the design! I think that while the font for your name is super cool, it doesn't fit the rest of the sites fonts. I think changing either the rest of the fonts to somewhat better match it, or the other way around would really do a lot! I also think having a text box for your type really takes away from the cool texture you've added for your background. I think taking that away or even just lowering the opacity on it could have worked well. Great job, and very cool theme!

Re: Project01 Final

Posted: Fri Sep 29, 2023 5:03 pm
by jillian_rodgers
Hi Chloe!

I think your final design is one of my absolute favorites! I love the contrast with the font and the paper crumple background, it really gives an artistic vibe to the whole website. Amazing job!

Re: Project01 Final

Posted: Fri Sep 29, 2023 7:24 pm
by kristenrothbauer
Hi Chloe!
I absolutely love the crumbled paper concept and the typeface you used for your name. You did such a great job at creating an inviting website, it looks fantastic!

Re: Project01 Final

Posted: Fri Sep 29, 2023 9:14 pm
by shasta_cola
Hey Chloe!

I love the final look of your website. It is very interesting. I like that you went with the crumpled paper concept. All of the little graphics you added are really cool and mysterious. I think you did a great job!

Re: Project01 Final

Posted: Fri Sep 29, 2023 10:39 pm
by Natuwu
Hi Chloe! I really like the aesthetic of your website! The only thing I would change is switching the placement of the textbox and the centipede so that it overlaps in the mobile version as well. Overall great job!

Re: Project01 Final

Posted: Sat Sep 30, 2023 7:52 am
by CedarM
Hi Chloe,
Well done on the final, I think you did a really good job with the overall feel of your website. Adding the crumpled paper background really adds to the creepy vibe and brings everything together.
-Cedar