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Re: Project 01 Final

Posted: Fri Sep 29, 2023 5:10 pm
by anacatnic
Hi nathan!!

I love how clean this looks! The layout works really well and does a great job of creating visual interest. Especially that photo!! Great job!!

Re: Project 01 Final

Posted: Fri Sep 29, 2023 5:37 pm
by jillian_rodgers
I am really enjoying the minimalistic approach for your design! The paintbrush stroke dividers are super intriguing too, that was such a fun idea :) Great job!

Re: Project 01 Final

Posted: Fri Sep 29, 2023 6:21 pm
by Austin_Niedfeldt
Hey Nathan!
Very clean and organized! I really like the look of the layout you chose to create for your webpage. One small suggestion I have would be the paragraph looks like it just got placed there, no rhyme or reason. I feel like you could mess around with different textbox shapes or fonts or something with it. Still looks great though!

Re: Project 01 Final

Posted: Fri Sep 29, 2023 7:54 pm
by kristenrothbauer
Hi Nathan!
Your layouts are super clean and organized, they look great! The colors, fonts, and pictures you used really help the design hold personality while still being very simple. Great work!

Re: Project 01 Final

Posted: Fri Sep 29, 2023 8:01 pm
by livitup1
The motion of your lines are very interesting. The way it all feels like it ties together

Re: Project 01 Final

Posted: Fri Sep 29, 2023 10:23 pm
by Natuwu
Hi Nathan! The grayscale you chose for your website was a really good idea! The only thing I would suggest is moving your image a bit towards the right in the desktop version, other than that you did a great job!

Re: Project 01 Final

Posted: Sat Sep 30, 2023 8:05 am
by CedarM
Hi Nathan,
Well done, I really like the sleek black and white design. And I particularly enjoy the really organic lines that break up your piece.
-Cedar