Re: Final project 1 Genevieve Dierenga
Posted: Fri Sep 29, 2023 6:06 pm
Super clean, Genevieve. Reminds me of a warm and inviting diner that is kept immaculate.
They layout is simple, which adds to the cleanliness. Everything is at hand and easy to find. And yet for all it's cleanliness, It isn't boring. You're a master at adding in little bits of visual texture so the eye doesn't get bored. I like the little, almost metallic, drop shadows under your headlines The way your title drops down through the bottom of your footer with a reversed drop shadow. Great margins everywhere also. Everything has room to breathe. You use proximity to create little content islands through the whole thing. Great type choices as well. The two typefaces work well together. Really reinforces the diner vibes. Well, those and your color choices which are excellent. Gentile pastel purple that plays with the white and a gray that gives great contrast without being harsh against the pastels or white.
Given how clean everything is on your layout, I think your bodycopy could have benefitted from being justified. Turn it into another hard block.
Excellent work!
They layout is simple, which adds to the cleanliness. Everything is at hand and easy to find. And yet for all it's cleanliness, It isn't boring. You're a master at adding in little bits of visual texture so the eye doesn't get bored. I like the little, almost metallic, drop shadows under your headlines The way your title drops down through the bottom of your footer with a reversed drop shadow. Great margins everywhere also. Everything has room to breathe. You use proximity to create little content islands through the whole thing. Great type choices as well. The two typefaces work well together. Really reinforces the diner vibes. Well, those and your color choices which are excellent. Gentile pastel purple that plays with the white and a gray that gives great contrast without being harsh against the pastels or white.
Given how clean everything is on your layout, I think your bodycopy could have benefitted from being justified. Turn it into another hard block.
Excellent work!