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Re: Project 01 Final
Posted: Fri Sep 29, 2023 4:26 pm
by anacatnic
Hi joey!!
That photo is a mood haha. I really enjoy the pop of color it gives and how you tied it in with your name. The paragraph is a little hard to read, i would maybe go with either a thicker font or more contrasting color to help with legibility. Overall, great job!!
Re: Project 01 Final
Posted: Fri Sep 29, 2023 6:35 pm
by jillian_rodgers
Hi Joey,
I love the photo you used, it definitely made me laugh a bit. The only critique I have is to make the paragraph on the computer rough more legible. Other than that, amazing job!
Re: Project 01 Final
Posted: Fri Sep 29, 2023 8:06 pm
by kristenrothbauer
Hi Joey!
I really love your website! It's super creative and immersive, great work!
Re: Project 01 Final
Posted: Fri Sep 29, 2023 10:26 pm
by Natuwu
Hi Joey! I really like the simplicity of your website, it is easy to navigate. The only thing I would suggest is choosing a different typeface or color so that the text stands out a bit more. Overall you did a great job!
Re: Project 01 Final
Posted: Sat Sep 30, 2023 8:03 am
by CedarM
Hi Joey,
Well done on this project, I really like the imagery used here I think the flamingo floaty is very eye catching and makes the viewer wonder. I do think that your text could stand to be a little darker, while I could read it it doesn't really jump off the page.
-Cedar