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Re: Project 3 Preliminary Roughs
Posted: Fri Oct 20, 2023 8:17 pm
by kristenrothbauer
Hi Austin!
I really love your first design! The color scheme and organization of it really caught my eye, and I really enjoyed how you laid out your type. Great work!
Re: Project 3 Preliminary Roughs
Posted: Fri Oct 20, 2023 9:05 pm
by CedarM
Hey Austin,
Well done on these designs, I think you really improved the website on both of your versions. I really like the first version best. I think your use of the colors to create cohesion works really well, I think this is where the second version goes off the rails a bit. The two pages don't really seem to match up and dont feel like a complete set.
-Cedar
Re: Project 3 Preliminary Roughs
Posted: Fri Oct 20, 2023 9:59 pm
by Natuwu
Hi Austin!
Your redesigns are very easy to navigate. I think it represents the artist very well and it does a good job at promoting the merch. I personally prefer your first design, i think that the black and white aspects compliment each other well.
Re: Project 3 Preliminary Roughs
Posted: Fri Oct 20, 2023 10:41 pm
by taylorichord
The first set is definitely my preference. The header color and image colors work very well together. I would only recommend making the header a little taller. The font you picked for the first set also works very well with the theme of the site.
Great work!