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Re: Project 1 Preliminary Critique

Posted: Fri Feb 16, 2024 4:09 pm
by seungwoo lee
Hello,

I think your first design. I like the natural background. I think it has good layout. Also, I think your web design is neat and easy to see.

Re: Project 1 Preliminary Critique

Posted: Fri Feb 16, 2024 5:20 pm
by Ashton_H
Hi, I like your lake design the most. I think you should put your photo beneath your name and move your body text down. I think if you had your name on one line instead of two it would look really good. i really like your designs!

Re: Project 1 Preliminary Critique

Posted: Fri Feb 16, 2024 9:50 pm
by ngrunwald
Hi Benjamin,
I really enjoyed your first design background. The river with the rocks being the main focus really drew me to it. Very good work.

Re: Project 1 Preliminary Critique

Posted: Fri Feb 16, 2024 10:52 pm
by wsgallegos
Hello,

I like the earthy colors and pics you have, reminds me of when I go fishing! Maybe adding different shapes or boarders would help make everything pop with the help of the pics and colors! good job!