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Re: Project One Preliminary Critique

Posted: Fri Sep 20, 2024 9:18 pm
by bumblebre
Hi Shasta!

I love your designs! Your headshots match the coloring and vibe of your designs which makes it all flow nicely! My favorite is the design with a background image, but your first design is also super clean! Everything is organized nicely. I personally don't know what you could change to make it better because of how nicely it already works together!

Thank you for sharing!

Re: Project One Preliminary Critique

Posted: Fri Sep 27, 2024 10:55 am
by Danielle Roberts
Hi Shasta,
I am very late for feedback but, I agree the first design is the best, The toolbar at the top seems easy to navigate. The composition in the first I think is the best. I do think you could make the toolbar selections more bold or you can choose a color that stands out more against the purple/maroon color. Overall I love the light color theme it speaks about your personality, great job!