Re: Project 01 - Preliminary
Posted: Fri Feb 21, 2025 7:33 pm
You did three designs, you absolute maniac! I always appreciate students who go the extra mile. You've got a couple of good ones here too. I like your third one, both for the contrast and for the sine wave shape that you've put your contact into.
I also like that you use yourself as the label. You look so nonplussed. Lol! As mentioned, I like the sine wave shape and how all of your images are drifting along with it. The contrast serves to really make the colors pop out and all the content pretty easy to see and read. Your margins aren't bad either. You play nicely with alignment in a couple areas especially with your other photo and your bodycopy. Your navigation is easy to see and use as well. It's prominently placed in both versions.
I'd recommend using a lighter weight font for your bodycopy, shrinking it a couple of points, and adding some space between your lines. Also, watch the space between your bodycopy, your contact information, and your navigation on your mobile version. Maybe see what the nav buttons would look like in TMCC's green, if you're going to use it in your composition.
Good work! Is that your YouTube channel, BTW?
I also like that you use yourself as the label. You look so nonplussed. Lol! As mentioned, I like the sine wave shape and how all of your images are drifting along with it. The contrast serves to really make the colors pop out and all the content pretty easy to see and read. Your margins aren't bad either. You play nicely with alignment in a couple areas especially with your other photo and your bodycopy. Your navigation is easy to see and use as well. It's prominently placed in both versions.
I'd recommend using a lighter weight font for your bodycopy, shrinking it a couple of points, and adding some space between your lines. Also, watch the space between your bodycopy, your contact information, and your navigation on your mobile version. Maybe see what the nav buttons would look like in TMCC's green, if you're going to use it in your composition.
Good work! Is that your YouTube channel, BTW?