Project 1 Preliminary Work

[laked02]

Hi Kai,
Both designs have two really distinct styles, and both have a lot of strong elements! The bold orange and green design is super modern and eye-catching. It gives off a high-energy feel. The typography is strong but some areas (like white text on yellow) could use a bit more contrast for readability. Spacing things out a bit more would also help with clarity. The hand-drawn wireframe version has a really creative and personal feel that makes it unique and approachable. Both designs have great potential, it just depends on which direction you want to take it!

[Adrian_Brewster]

Hello!
While its very simple i thing the white and black concept is your best one! Its not distracting but still draws your eye in a really fun way! Your second has a really good sense of layout, everything is set up in a way that makes sense, the white on the yellowish orange is a bit hard to read for the smaller text, otherwise its also a fun design!