Project01 Preliminary Work
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Adrian_Brewster
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Re: Project01 Preliminary Work
Hi Lucio! I really like how creative your websites are, I find them both to be very visually interesting. The first one is my personal favorite and my only input for that one is to maybe match where the grc text in on both your website and mobile versions. For your second one, adding a stronger boarder to the pin board texture might help it show more visually. You did a good job, I really enjoyed your designs and I'm excited to see which one you choose!
~Adrian 
Re: Project01 Preliminary Work
Hi Lucio,
Both designs have a cool, scrapbook-style aesthetic that makes them feel more personal. The hand-drawn elements and textured backgrounds add a cool touch, making the website feel more warm and inviting. The first design has a great vintage feel, but the text could stand out more against the background. Maybe consider a slightly darker font or a subtle overlay may help. The second design, with the dog and color-blocked sections, is fun and organized, but the color contrast could be improved to make the text just a little more readable. Both versions have a lot of personality, just small tweaks to readability and spacing would make them even stronger!
Both designs have a cool, scrapbook-style aesthetic that makes them feel more personal. The hand-drawn elements and textured backgrounds add a cool touch, making the website feel more warm and inviting. The first design has a great vintage feel, but the text could stand out more against the background. Maybe consider a slightly darker font or a subtle overlay may help. The second design, with the dog and color-blocked sections, is fun and organized, but the color contrast could be improved to make the text just a little more readable. Both versions have a lot of personality, just small tweaks to readability and spacing would make them even stronger!
~ Lakelyn Dean