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Re: Project One - preliminary

Posted: Fri Feb 21, 2025 8:38 pm
by laked02
Hi Ashley,
Both designs have a fun and creative feel and the consistent purple theme makes them stand out! The first design has a soft and dreamy aesthetic with the gradient and stars. Consider a little more contrast in the text to make it more readable. The second design has a cute floral theme that adds a lot of personality but maybe spacing things out and aligning them better would make it look cleaner. Overall, both have a lot of charm and I personally like the flower design the most!

Re: Project One - preliminary

Posted: Fri Feb 21, 2025 9:03 pm
by Adrian_Brewster
Hi Ashley! I love how you were inspired my older my space vibes! I can definitely see the vision in your roughs. Some of your text is a little warped here and there but my favorite composition you did was the first mobile design! It feels well put together and its really easy to read. If you match the colors and the shapes for the website version it would look great!