Re: Jeremy's roughs for project 1
Posted: Sun Feb 17, 2013 9:27 pm
Hi Jeremy~
I like design one the best. I feel that the monocromatic look is very crisp and clean, and the black and white photo of you is great. I also like the gradients you have used and the button glass look is very effective. If it was me, I'd take a look at the last paragraph of text; I know you have it set up to flow around the photo box, but that last paragraph seems too wide to me. I wonder if left aligning the last paragraph with the first two paragraphs would be easier on the eyes?
On design 2, totally different feel from design one, which I like since it gives two real distinct designs to evaluate. I like the color choices and the side navigation layout. Same thing here with paragraph width as in design 1, although its the first paragraph on this design. Same recommendation applies. Also, I'm not a fan of the typeface you chose for the top.
Overall, I like the work you've done. Nice work.
I like design one the best. I feel that the monocromatic look is very crisp and clean, and the black and white photo of you is great. I also like the gradients you have used and the button glass look is very effective. If it was me, I'd take a look at the last paragraph of text; I know you have it set up to flow around the photo box, but that last paragraph seems too wide to me. I wonder if left aligning the last paragraph with the first two paragraphs would be easier on the eyes?
On design 2, totally different feel from design one, which I like since it gives two real distinct designs to evaluate. I like the color choices and the side navigation layout. Same thing here with paragraph width as in design 1, although its the first paragraph on this design. Same recommendation applies. Also, I'm not a fan of the typeface you chose for the top.
Overall, I like the work you've done. Nice work.