I really like almost everything about this design. It has a mood to it and is visually interesting.
the only thing that distracts me is the plaid border seems out of place, makes it look a little like a menu. doesnt seem like it needs a pattern
♦Project 1 Final ♦
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This site is so cool. This might be one of my favorites. I like the changes...I think I would have like to see some of the b;lue from the sky in the design with those oranges, but it still looks awesome.
Justin Hubert
Re: ♦Project 1 Final ♦
Nice! I love everything! The one thing that I would change is the font in the body type to make it a bit more readable. Great work!
Brian Freeman
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I like the old design better. I felt it was more daring and imaginative. If you go with the new version I'd change the body copy font; this on is too hard to read.
E.K. Fulton
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Nice work, you have good colors and it has great visual appeal.
Jeremy Winkler
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Re: ♦Project 1 Final ♦
Martin,
I agree with several other posters that your original concept was stronger. I think the new layout and color scheme take too much away from the great illustration. The drawings should be the focal point of the piece.
Aharon
I agree with several other posters that your original concept was stronger. I think the new layout and color scheme take too much away from the great illustration. The drawings should be the focal point of the piece.
Aharon
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Aharon Williams
Aharon Williams
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cool looking design