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Re: ♦Project 1 Final ♦

Posted: Mon Mar 18, 2013 8:21 am
by mawpe
I really like almost everything about this design. It has a mood to it and is visually interesting.
the only thing that distracts me is the plaid border seems out of place, makes it look a little like a menu. doesnt seem like it needs a pattern

Re: ♦Project 1 Final ♦

Posted: Mon Mar 18, 2013 9:22 pm
by Justin Hubert
This site is so cool. This might be one of my favorites. I like the changes...I think I would have like to see some of the b;lue from the sky in the design with those oranges, but it still looks awesome.

Re: ♦Project 1 Final ♦

Posted: Mon Mar 18, 2013 10:52 pm
by freem110
Nice! I love everything! The one thing that I would change is the font in the body type to make it a bit more readable. Great work!

Re: ♦Project 1 Final ♦

Posted: Mon Mar 18, 2013 11:05 pm
by ekfulton
I like the old design better. I felt it was more daring and imaginative. If you go with the new version I'd change the body copy font; this on is too hard to read.

Re: ♦Project 1 Final ♦

Posted: Wed Mar 20, 2013 3:54 pm
by Landsknecht
Nice work, you have good colors and it has great visual appeal.

Re: ♦Project 1 Final ♦

Posted: Thu Mar 21, 2013 10:22 am
by Heyyou
Martin,

I agree with several other posters that your original concept was stronger. I think the new layout and color scheme take too much away from the great illustration. The drawings should be the focal point of the piece.

Aharon

Re: ♦Project 1 Final ♦

Posted: Sun Apr 07, 2013 9:14 am
by campbell_mckeogh
cool looking design