Jeremy Winkler Project 1 Final
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Re: Jeremy Winkler Project 1 Final
Hey Jeremy, I think the space at the bottom of your design could be lessened and maybe a nice textured backgrpound in the far backl layer would add some character to the layout. other than that I think it is pretty clean and serves it's purpose.
Justin Hubert
Re: Jeremy Winkler Project 1 Final
Hi there,
I like the monochromatic approach you have taken for your design. I'm not sure a color rollover will add anything to the design, in fact, it might detract from the design. Maybe a glow rollover effect in monochrome or some other type of rollover animation would work better than color to stay true to your design.
I like the monochromatic approach you have taken for your design. I'm not sure a color rollover will add anything to the design, in fact, it might detract from the design. Maybe a glow rollover effect in monochrome or some other type of rollover animation would work better than color to stay true to your design.
E.K. Fulton
ekfulton@gmail.com | 775-298-1515 mobile
ekfulton@gmail.com | 775-298-1515 mobile
Re: Jeremy Winkler Project 1 Final
Jeremy,
The clarity and contrast is great in this layout. I agree that the rollovers might need some working on. They need to stand out from their previous state and be more distinctive. Very nice use of layout and hierarchy.
Aharon
The clarity and contrast is great in this layout. I agree that the rollovers might need some working on. They need to stand out from their previous state and be more distinctive. Very nice use of layout and hierarchy.
Aharon
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Aharon Williams
Aharon Williams
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Re: Jeremy Winkler Project 1 Final
I feel you need at add different profile photo it just seems a bit pretentious to me